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| Author: | Draco Mutation [ Sun May 23, 2010 3:56 am ] |
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Hello, new chapter http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5943525/8/Consumption I have got some stuff planed for the next few chapters that might suprise you. |
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| Author: | AmazonLeopard [ Tue May 25, 2010 8:43 pm ] |
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I thought the clones would be totally evil, but instead they seem just as frightened of mother as everyone else. I don’t know if you planned it that way, but I thought the Yuri at the beginning was the original Yuri at first. I like that clone Yuri’s ‘house’ looks like her normal bedroom but then ends in a cave. |
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| Author: | Draco Mutation [ Tue May 25, 2010 9:29 pm ] |
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Yes I did want it to seem like it was the original Yuri only for it to be revealed to be the clone, not all of them are afraid of Mother, Kasumi's clone is not afraid of Mother but she has other issues as shown in that chapter, also Mother is capitilized becouse it is her name, just pointing that out. |
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| Author: | AmazonLeopard [ Tue May 25, 2010 9:45 pm ] |
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Okay, I got it. And I did notice something funny about the Kasumi clone too. She was nice one second and then mean the next. She's kind of mood swingy like the original Kasumi, as if she's hiding other issues. |
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| Author: | Draco Mutation [ Tue May 25, 2010 9:48 pm ] |
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Yes, she is alittle nutty like the real Kasumi, but unlike her she dosnt have a family, it dosnt help that she has all the real Kasumi's memorys. |
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| Author: | AmazonLeopard [ Tue May 25, 2010 10:06 pm ] |
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Hey I wonder if maybe she would think of Tatsuo as a brother. |
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| Author: | Draco Mutation [ Tue May 25, 2010 10:07 pm ] |
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they are both creations of Mother so that would be correct. |
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| Author: | Draco Mutation [ Sun May 30, 2010 9:02 pm ] |
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Oh yes I am posting so that means I have a new chapter! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5943525/9/Consumption |
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| Author: | AmazonLeopard [ Sun Jun 06, 2010 9:17 pm ] |
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This is good. Now we know what became of Kumi and Yuri's clones. Also, I thought the clone had done something to Taros for a second. |
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| Author: | Draco Mutation [ Sun Jun 06, 2010 11:05 pm ] |
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Next chapter is comming soon, it will focus on them trying to get to Mother this time, expect much psychological torture in future chapters. |
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| Author: | Draco Mutation [ Thu Jun 10, 2010 5:24 am ] |
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Here is another chapter http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5943525/10/Consumption |
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| Author: | Repo Baxil [ Fri Jun 11, 2010 9:56 am ] |
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I've been extremely busy for a while now, but lately things have let up for me. So, I'm sorry that I have'nt been posting any  but I recently stated reading this fanfic you're reading, and I'm quite enjoying it  Keep up the good work! (by the way, I'm at chapter 5 right now, so I'm still a little behind, getting caught up :p )
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| Author: | Draco Mutation [ Fri Jun 11, 2010 5:49 pm ] |
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Thank you, tell me what you think wan you've read all the way through. |
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| Author: | Draco Mutation [ Sun Jun 20, 2010 3:54 am ] |
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New chapter http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5943525/11/Consumption but I am disipointed with how qiet this forum has gotten, I thought summer would have people posting more, I would post as offen as posible if someone els would just post. |
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| Author: | Repo Baxil [ Mon Jun 21, 2010 6:20 am ] |
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Hey there, I'm all caught up now! I'm really enjoying your fanfic, it's very exciting! I'm can only speak for myself, but I once again apologize for my absence. I promise that I will be here to leave prompt feedback and forum responses now  Keep up the good work 
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